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I'm only so far in and already- well first, some proofreading; you misspelled elusive as "illusive"; there was something else, I think, but I can't remember it nor find it again because of being distracted by some... TMI-level material. :T Really wish I didn't have to read that. I'm not even through...

Oh, pooh pooh. I'm much better at spotting it in other people's work than my own, unfortunately... and yes, it does suck when technically, you spelled the word right and it doesn't get pegged; because you just typo'd it into another word entirely. >.< Or you used the wrong word; for the same reason....

Right, so. Once you accidentally called Hisa Gato "Hiroshi Gato", when Reno was talking to Cobalt, I think it was. You misspelled "chef" as "chief", and in one series of paragraphs where Reno was talking continually, you didn't break them up at all. I mean, you can't really tell that they're suppose...

... *squints at u* I don't trust you, man... but... *reads anyways*

If you gank Reno I'm going to be very upset. :T

Yes, well, that too. He's the least mentally stable of the lot.

I think I've seen Cosmic boy before, or some variations thereof. And yes, he does look good with different eye colors. Unfortunately, it sometimes upsets people with brown eyes to say things like that too much...

I saw the notification on FF first, for once. :3 Gonna read it... (although still lowkey concerned about when Atom becomes involved in this, and what exactly will transpire from this- I have a fear...) Edit: You misspelled "bide" as "bid" in one line; in another, you misspelled flour as "flower". Th...

I'm the type to only want certain things, sure; but I've got a problem when the thing I want happens to be exclusive to somewhere else. :T

Pfft, cute!

And just because there is a cosmetic error in the design, that does not mean that it wasn't officially licensed. It just means that Tezuka himself likely had little to do with its actual creation. The art style isn't quite on model, either- unless it was from the 80's...