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Ooh, cool! Another story! I'll try to read it soon. (The chapter name sound interesting.)

EDIT: I was thinking of making another Astro Boy fan fiction (Or maybe even a doujin). I have a how to draw manga book, and manga pens now. If anyone would like, I could post my story (once I began to write it, of course). Most of my fan fictions have all be failures. One of the reasons is probably because I don't think them through. I never thought about the plot. But this time, I will. (I'll be writing two stories, my novel for NaNoWriMo, and the Astro Boy fan fiction, maybe.)

the fic is on fan fiction too called "Zoran and the Madman" i couldn't write in the title becuase word limit

A madman...Temna? !!!!!!!!!!!

you just have to read why in the nect chapter

It was a guess, I haven't read it yet but I plan to.

in the mean time i'll let you can comment

I finally read your story, Astronomical girl. Its so cool! (I mean, the fact that Uran-Zoran- died is sad, but the idea of the story is epic!)

Chapter two: Her revival

However, not everybody thinks that this was a funeral. Tenma hovered above the site and had the hover morph from a vehicle to a submarine. He dove in to the water. He waited as the bubbled clear away as he would turn on the dark lights to find what he was looking for. Searching, He only saw the remains of the torn of rig but he continued. Searching still he thought in his mind a plan.He looked around but then his scan has detected a heat source and moving humanoid. He commanded the computer to take him to the source and led him to the fallen beam where the source was swimming. Zoran was in fact alive and trying to swim her way through the murky water. Tenma magnified and Zoran was blind, he assumes that when the beam crashed on her the pressure was taken by her irises thus creating a crack or cracks in the material. Tenma took this opportunity and shot out a claw.

“If only fishing was this easy” Tenma thought
Zoran’s POV

Murky and foggy was the water around me. I was blind in the water I couldn’t see well in the water. Trying to find my way up to the surface and trying to dodge the beam, I felt something grab my waist. I panicked. I was trying to swim away but pulled me backwards, I tried to slip out but it was tight around my waist. Again I struggled to slip out or pull out but each try I got weaker and more frightened I was more then panicking I was terrorized. Then I heard a thud and everything was silent and dark. She floated and then the water drained then it heated up so that the room was dry. She was set on the floor where the drain drained the water, and she looked around but still blurred she was more scared. Then as she sat she heard this /whish/ sound then she looked and saw a seated black figure. She was then on her knees. Trying to speak out a word and a reaction

“Hello?

She saw the black figure stand and walk towards her. She crawled backwards but only hit the back. The figure walked closer to her and placed a large towel over her. Then she peeked from the towel.

“Zoran, welcome aboard, my dear” a baritone voice spoke
She looked up at the black figure and quivered. He moved closer to her.

“Zoran, what do you see?

“What do you mean?

“Do see me as a person or as a blur?

“A blob of black and peach surrounded by gray and colored lights is all I see”

“Your irises are cracked most likely, which is why you can’t see clearly, luckily for you I happen to have”

I felt the ship I was in accelerated faster and I hit the back of my head and fell asleep

Tenma’s POV

Now that she is onboard, the next trip is my laboratory. I changed speed and course to Metro city bay at 9000 nautical kilometers per hour per hour (that is 18,000 km per hour or approx 1118 miles per hour- 1 knot is 2km, 1.150 ml). With a period of four hours I landed on the bay then hovered back to my sanctuary. As we landed, my dog greeted me. I stood up from the panel and walked towards Zoran. I saw the towel that I handed to her then I found her as a white lump. I partially peaked underneath the towel and there quietly she slept. I picked her up with the towel and left the hover. Walked back inside there my work would begin. I placed her on the examination table and heard.

/Beep/beep/Beep/beep/

I walked over to the Tele-monitor (a screen -like telephone) and answered. I clicked on the button and appeared Shadow.

“Hello, Shadow”

“Greetings, Tenma, I apologize for calling you at such late hours however I am to inform you that we are currently at the Star ship near Titan, only temporary until such time”

“Good, do think that you would kind another rig? I asked

“Not likely but only the scans can tell us…why is Zoran there with you?

Shadow noticed

“I rescued her, I brought her here to repair, upgrade, and remodel her for my purposes” I answered

“Your purposes, Doctor?

“Yes, my purposes, do you have objections?

“No, however still, why for your purposes, Doctor? And not for Astro, why are you changing tactics and if so for what reason?

“Shadow, as you have witnessed time and time again have I tried to convince Astro, each time have proven a failure and today was a gamble and he has stated and is determined to be neutral”

“What luck will you have with Zoran? She is half of what Astro is”

“Yes, Zoran being so young and naïve, she is practically new, and since she was build on my model for Astro, the programming and circuitry will not be as time consuming and True, she is weaker then Astro but as I stated, Zoran is his technological sister, this will come to our advantage and I can mold her mind and body and force her against my will by using the telekinesis pin”
I show him a chip that looks like sowing pin.

“Doctor, I thought that you would never use such tactic even on a robot”

“The pin will only be used a security factor should she leave with out me, the
pin would stop the impulse back and forth from her brain, also will force her to mature and learn”

“Doctor, you have only so much time to train and to teach her, but what will she become?

“Instead of Zoran, Uranium or Uran will be her new name when I am finished with Zoran but, Shadow how long for the Blue Knight to recuperate?

“The rest of the spring season then into early summer and we will wait when the Humans make their move first, I must go, Good night Doctor” He hung up.

Zoran’s POV

I woke up on a table of sorts and looked up at the ceiling and bright lights attached to a panel. I sat up and on each side of me were sounds of whirring and clanking machinery then I saw a black, white, and peachy blob next to me, I felt a pinch on my neck and I laid back down then I was strapped down. I tried to wriggle my way out then pull myself but I felt weaker then I felt tired and I fell asleep.

Tenma’s POV

Offline, strapped, and ready thus I began to prepare. I took out my tools from tough and heavy machinery tools to thin and delicate surgical tools turned on the overhead light and began my work. I first took off her clothes one by one and turned her over to her spine and with a small wheel I cut through the skin and spine from the bottom of her back to the neck where the head meets. I then removed the skin and took out spine blocks about four inches then replaced the skin. I moved on to her limbs, I proceeded the same treatment to her legs and arms increased the length with limb blocks, as well as her new body being a much taller difference, I moved on to the genital details. I took a scalpel and cut her chest in 3.5x Pi. Taking off the cut pieces I placed them aside and returned to the melted silicon and put the silicon in to bowl molds, let it settle, placed them in cold water, took them out and let them cool. In the meantime I began working on chip to connect the chest to the cleavage to give the silicon a sensitivity of touch and share of body warmth. With that completed I took the cooled silicon and inserted the wiring with the same sensitivity of real cleavage a small bump appeared on top of each it was perfect. He inserted them connected and covered the silicon with the cut pieces of skin, again I tested the sensitivity again the little bump exerted against the skin to give it more look, I darken around the bulge to give it identity. I cut out a small part of her hips and curved, and smoothed them to give her more of a feminine appearance, to make her more human, I pulled her legs apart and used the scalpel again and cut a three four inches long cut and put in synthetic antipose and folded and sown then inserted a heated rod and used the heated skin and shaped more there then inserted black hair above the heat rod where the skin was heated and molten. Taking that out and allowed that to cool, I moved on to weapons. Her hips would had plasma bullets and her legs have cannon and rockets, her arms were multitasked, all her fingers were utensils with lasers with electric blades and left arm a bolt cannon. I decided for her hair should synthetic and so I removed that and placed the six telekinesis pins on in font and two on each side same in the back. At the back of the head was a cordial outlet which I inserted the cord into the computer then I sat in front and began programming. First her primary directive was given to Kokoro program and then he programmed her weaponry and response and new task for the sensory program.

Wow, cool story. I foresee a battle coming up.

"Astronomical girl" wrote:Chapter one: Zoran’s death

Authors POV
Away from any city or island stood an old rig in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, where held a human and robotic battle between Drake and his crew with robotic armor verses The Blue Knight and his gang of battle bots along side with Astro whom flew in to stop the fighting trying as he may be was still being hit and shot and defended. Watching this were the three men behind each side, Shadow and Dr.Tenma on the AI robots and Drake on Anti-AI each with a reason to destroy the other. Kato already had bombed the rigs stands and was now about to sink. Shadow was on a hovering disk, Tenma in his hover and Drake in his sub. On the decks, O’Shay and Zoran were ushering the robots on the Blue Knights stealth ship. Tenma taking took a few minutes glance off at Astro and at O’Shay and Zoran.

“O’Shay, in trying to convince Astro to take neither side and to protect the humans along side his own kind, he is not yours O’Shay have has, never will. There must be another way of convincing Astro into joining our cause, but how? Tenma thought bitterly

Then he remembers about what he had been told from his Uncle as a child.

/flashback/

Tenma was ten and was bullied by a boy in his class because of he hurt a project that he had finished and was better then the boys. His Uncle Tororo had said to him.

“Umatoro, listen, if you want revenge but don’t want to be hurt physically try this tactic, try attacking his heart”

“His heart, what do you mean, Uncle? He asked

“A cunning warrior fights better if with a quick mind and or body if he attacks his heart, in simpler terms, my nephew, you given him a taste of his own medicine, because if he use his opposites most precious object against him he will be bend to your will”

/Flashback ends/

“But Astro’s most protected thing is Zoran, but if I slow her down and capture her ,O’Shay and Astro will be given no choice but to leave her” He smirked

As fewer robots were being evacuated off the drowning island, O’Shay told Zoran to get back into the hover. As she ran back, Tenma took the opportunity to blast a part of the high deck which fell accordingly. As the beam fell, Zoran heard something coming down and tried to run as fast as her legs could carry her but although she was halfway out the beam fell down on her hips.

“Screams…ASTRO, DR.O’SHAY! HELP, I’M STUCK UNDERNEATH A BEAM! She cries out


As Tenma tastes success, Astro who heard her saw her body half way under the beam. He zooms down to her and tries to lift the beam off her but the beam exceeded his maximum lift. He tried thinking of ways to get her out but the rig was sinking fast and the beam would only weigh more underwater and Zoran is damaged and underwater electricity is dangerous enough to electrocute both Zoran and him killing them. He would try to cut the beam with his laser but the beam is made covered with anti beam his laser would only bounce off. He was out off ideas; He tried to pull her out.

“Zoran! He cried

“Brother, leave me! She yelled

“No, I’ll try to get you out” He told her

“Astro what happened? Dr. O’Shay yelled
O’Shay was in the hover. Hover above the two

“Zoran is caught under the beam and I can’t get her out” he answered

“Can’t you lift it up?

“No, if I do that I’ll strain myself and break by arms off”

Tenma seeing this hid from view and continued to watch Astro’s struggle. The rig sunk deeper and Astro took his hands off the beam and flew down to Zoran and hung on to his sister’s hand. Astro began to cry.

“Zoran…sob…please, don’t let go…sob” He sobbed

“Astro, don’t go down with me” She said

“But if I do…sob…I’ll loose you and I don’t want to let you go”

“Astro…the world needs you more then me, Doctor O’Shay can make me again or you can have a brother” she suggested

“NO! I want “my” Zoran and “my” sister not a replacement or another, just you” He cried loudly

“Astro…please, always follow what you know and always use your heart when making decisions…/bang/….”

ZORAN! He yelled

He looked down at her and saw her sparkling eyes gazing at him.

“Astro…big brother…I have and will always be proud of and love you” She fainted

/silence/

/heartbeat/heartbeat/heartbeat/

“No…please…don’t…ZORAN”

/silence ends/

SPLASH!

CLANG!

BANG!

The water splashed and bashed against Astro and the beam and sunk Zoran with it. Astro zoomed out from the water and saw the entire rig sink under the water. He saw as the rig sunk down the sea floor with his most precious, most loved, and protected person in the world down with it, Zoran. O’Shay saw thing felt the same way that Tenma must have felt when he lost Tobio, Pain and agony of loosing your own child in this case your own creation. Astro stood and O’Shay hovered over to him and handed him her ring of flowered that she made. He threw the band of flowers on the ocean. Then he whispered a song that he remembered from Tobio.

/ Teru no uta by Teshima Aoi or Teru’s song from “Tales of Earthsea” (YouTube)/
Yuuyami semaru kumo no ue
Itsumo ichiwa de tonde iru
Taka wa kitto kanashi karou
Oto mo todaeta kaze no naka
Sora wo tsukanda sono tsubasa
Yasumeru koto wa deki nakute

Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Taka no you na kono kokoro
Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Sora wo mau yo na kanashi sa wo

Ame no sobo furui wakage ni
Itsumo chiisaku saite iru
Hana wa kitto setsuna karou
Iro mo kasunda ame no naka
Usu momo-iro no hanabira wo
Medete kureru te mo nakute

O’Shay looked at Astro and knew how he would felt if he had lost someone he loved dearly. O’Shay also wondered about the song he just heard. He asked

“Astro, that was very lovely, where did you hear that? He asked

“I remember it from Tobio’s memories, when he and Tenma and someone else was at a funeral”

He stepped into the hover and looked back the site one last time before zooming off away with a heavy heart and a painful scar. To Astro this was the last time he would see his sister.
Or would it?

I felt really bad for Astro