Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:54 pm
ME!! ME!! ME!!
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:02 am
/Jamaican accent/tell us man! or we explode!/Jamaican accent/
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:08 am
*puts on Italian accent* Si, fatecelo sapere!
(I used a translating engine, not sure if it is correct)
(I used a translating engine, not sure if it is correct)
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:11 am
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:52 am
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:25 am
(Cool, really?!)
Well, it starts with Uran getting bullied at school. (She and Cobalt are in the same class.)
She asks Astro why robots are treated badly. Astro doesn't give a real answer, but suggests that they get upgraded. Uran went crazy about the idea.
So, Dr. Elefun upgrades them with the latest armor and weapons.
(Astro had:
Full armor like a knight. They come out from a circle in his chest, like a transformer. His finger lasers are now laser machine guns. His but guns... are now rockets. XD His arm cannon is stronger (like in the 2003 series, he only has one). And now, his other hand transforms into a black sword.
Cobalt: The same things as Astro, except his sword is smaller
Uran: Still talks to animals, and now knows different languages, even alien and monster ones. (a translator. :lol
She grows wings, and can fly like Astro and Cobalt. She wears a band around her thigh, which when she grabs it, it turns into a long, sharp stick. Vines grow from it, and wrap around her hand. She also has a bow and arrow.)
Cobalt walks out of the Ministry of Science, planning to try out his new weapons.
Then, a monster attacks Cobalt. Cobalt was unprepared, and Uran saves him. Cobalt gets mad at her, saying that he could have killed the monster by himself. Since Uran has been down in the dumps, she was hurt by Cobalts rudeness. Cobalt runs away, back into the Ministry of Science to find Astro.
(I don't want to spoil to much about it, so I will just speed up with the rest that I have right now).
Uran is killed brutally. But, before she dies, she gives Astro her memory card (before sh dies). The brothers (Astro and Cobalt) were angered over Uran's death.
(Thats all I have for now. Hope chu all like the plot. I will finished some more pages, and then try to post it here on the forum.
)
EDIT: Uran and Cobalt are twelve and in middle school, Astro is sixteen and in high school.
Well, it starts with Uran getting bullied at school. (She and Cobalt are in the same class.)
She asks Astro why robots are treated badly. Astro doesn't give a real answer, but suggests that they get upgraded. Uran went crazy about the idea.
So, Dr. Elefun upgrades them with the latest armor and weapons.
(Astro had:
Full armor like a knight. They come out from a circle in his chest, like a transformer. His finger lasers are now laser machine guns. His but guns... are now rockets. XD His arm cannon is stronger (like in the 2003 series, he only has one). And now, his other hand transforms into a black sword.
Cobalt: The same things as Astro, except his sword is smaller
Uran: Still talks to animals, and now knows different languages, even alien and monster ones. (a translator. :lol
She grows wings, and can fly like Astro and Cobalt. She wears a band around her thigh, which when she grabs it, it turns into a long, sharp stick. Vines grow from it, and wrap around her hand. She also has a bow and arrow.)Cobalt walks out of the Ministry of Science, planning to try out his new weapons.
Then, a monster attacks Cobalt. Cobalt was unprepared, and Uran saves him. Cobalt gets mad at her, saying that he could have killed the monster by himself. Since Uran has been down in the dumps, she was hurt by Cobalts rudeness. Cobalt runs away, back into the Ministry of Science to find Astro.
(I don't want to spoil to much about it, so I will just speed up with the rest that I have right now).
Uran is killed brutally. But, before she dies, she gives Astro her memory card (before sh dies). The brothers (Astro and Cobalt) were angered over Uran's death.
(Thats all I have for now. Hope chu all like the plot. I will finished some more pages, and then try to post it here on the forum.
)EDIT: Uran and Cobalt are twelve and in middle school, Astro is sixteen and in high school.
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:28 am
dude...Sixteen i'll be that two months i'm alread in 10th grade 
i'm alread in 10th grade Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:30 am
Two months? I'm gonna be 13 this month. 
Anyways, what do chu think of the plot? :]
Anyways, what do chu think of the plot? :]
Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:31 am
i still feel thirteen 
is that bad?
is that bad?Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:49 am
I'm turning 16 in a few months as well.
Just out of curiosity and I don't care if you did this. Did the whole armor thing that I did in my Astro Boy 2085 story inspire your knight armor thing? But that does sound interesting.
Also guys I started on chapter 7 for 2085 today. If you haven't read previous chapters READ THEM. I'm sorta speculating on how it's going to end but I don't want to reveal it to you guys any time soon. However I'm most likely going to put Rock Holmes in this story.
All I'm going to say on him is that he will be a lot like he was in 03 series.
Just out of curiosity and I don't care if you did this. Did the whole armor thing that I did in my Astro Boy 2085 story inspire your knight armor thing? But that does sound interesting.
Also guys I started on chapter 7 for 2085 today. If you haven't read previous chapters READ THEM. I'm sorta speculating on how it's going to end but I don't want to reveal it to you guys any time soon. However I'm most likely going to put Rock Holmes in this story.
All I'm going to say on him is that he will be a lot like he was in 03 series.