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Astro's thoughts - A poem

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:21 pm
by Bakabits
This was written as if from Astro's POV. It is supposed to be a letter from him to his fans. ENJOY! :)

Astro’s Thoughts

This life of mine
Slumbers in my spine.

While you are impressed
I am depressed.

While you slumber
I wonder
Why do humans fail to understand
The pain I withstand?

I feel like an outcast
Always downcast.

While we fight
I see a light
Which gives me hope
While I climb the rope
To nowhere.

So I continue to find
Reasons to still be kind
Like my friends’
Willingness to cleanse
The amount of hate
In this strait.

While you slumber
I will ALWAYS wonder
Why do human’s fail to understand
The pain I withstand?

My mind is blank
But my heart is a bank
Holding many dear
But nothing clear.

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 2:46 am
by Astro Boy2866
Good job :)

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 3:39 am
by InsaneAstroBoyLover
OHHOHO! THAT'S AWESOME!!!! Keep it up!

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:25 am
by avatargirl
hi- hugs THANKS ASTROMARS137- HOPE WE WILL always be friends- love you for being a friend- thanks so much- agree with ASTRO BOY 2866 and INSANEASTROBOYLOVER

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 3:26 pm
by AprilSeven
Wow, that expresses very poignantly how I imagine his thoughts of humanity. Beautiful job.

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:06 pm
by Bakabits
lol believe it or not this took me only 5 min to write. :lol: the idea came into my head and i said "omg i have to write this before i forget!" I annoyed some people on the game i was playing because i quit but life is not perfect you know. :p The poem was based off of the 03 astro BTW.

Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:42 pm
by Androids101
I'm impressed, and I'm sure Astro would be to ;)

Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:06 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
oohhh poor astro wahhh

Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:40 pm
by astrogirl0708
:cry: awww that is the cutest poem ever!!!!!!!

Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:43 pm
by astrogirl0708
so the 03 astro is from 2009?