Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:16 am
A prolonged silence had followed, temporarily broken when O'Shay had left the building, but the silence still remained.
Tenma had pondered these words. He wondered for a moment if he was in a dream, or because of Shunsaku Ban's incident, a nightmare. Light tapping had pelted against a window nearby, the rain was still there but slowly letting up from that dreadful, earlier drizzle. He glanced over to the glass window, half covered by binds, and for a moment thought he could see something. Leaving Black Jack without a response, he approached the window and lowered his head to look through it.
The Ministry of Science was in clear view. But in his mind, all he could see was the illusionary sight of that laboratory looming over the city, the one that he alone owned. And upon seeing such a sight, was reminded of the wrong-doings he had done a long time ago. He turned around and saw Astro Boy, the very cause of his actions.
At first Tenma was frowning, but then his lips had formed a small smirk as he squinted back at the boy. Then suddenly, he blurted out a short laugh, ending when he softly bumped his head against the glass. His shoulders was still moving up and down from the humor that he had found.
"Hoshie would have been terrified if she saw the things I've done!..." Tenma said, still half laughing.
"I don't deserve such things..."
(Androids, you could have also responded to what Hoshie left for O'Shay in her will.)
Tenma had pondered these words. He wondered for a moment if he was in a dream, or because of Shunsaku Ban's incident, a nightmare. Light tapping had pelted against a window nearby, the rain was still there but slowly letting up from that dreadful, earlier drizzle. He glanced over to the glass window, half covered by binds, and for a moment thought he could see something. Leaving Black Jack without a response, he approached the window and lowered his head to look through it.
The Ministry of Science was in clear view. But in his mind, all he could see was the illusionary sight of that laboratory looming over the city, the one that he alone owned. And upon seeing such a sight, was reminded of the wrong-doings he had done a long time ago. He turned around and saw Astro Boy, the very cause of his actions.
At first Tenma was frowning, but then his lips had formed a small smirk as he squinted back at the boy. Then suddenly, he blurted out a short laugh, ending when he softly bumped his head against the glass. His shoulders was still moving up and down from the humor that he had found.
"Hoshie would have been terrified if she saw the things I've done!..." Tenma said, still half laughing.
"I don't deserve such things..."
(Androids, you could have also responded to what Hoshie left for O'Shay in her will.)
i made the charactor so i think it be better if i did the charactor. but what do you think about the story so far?