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"I granted your wish of rest, but don't worry in the morning you'll plenty of time to get to the Ministry and when you get home there will be dinner too" I told him

I saw hime rest in a near by chair and nod to me,i bend down to his shoes and undid the buckle and took off his shoes and placed them again and said.

"You have very big feet, haha" i laughed
I saw him taking in deep breaths and rests and i told him.

"I'm going to go get my shower and pajama's and i'll have myself ready for bed" I told him

When i walked into a girls room and walked to her dresser and took out a bluen night gown with white floral lace and rushed to the bathroom and turned on the water and undressed myself and turned on the shower head then i bathed. after a 20 minutes inthe shower i walked out with my hair in a towel and slippers and went into the guest bedroom when i turned on the lights i saw...a man in the room. I took a deep breath and screamed.

OTOOSAN,BLACK JACK SEN...! I was gagged and struggled

then Bolt and Paige sounded off and Bolt transformed from a puppy to a wolf in under a minute and attacked the intruder and Paige got me free and he getting free and I had to do it. I gazed at him and thown him out an open window then back in to the bedroom and aimed a gun right at me but then he went. i pinched a nerve in his hand

"GAH" he shouted
As he held the hand that held the gun and i took the gun from him and emptied the bullets out and threw the gun askew. I was holding him and the dogs both in wolf form, growled and snarled at the indruder then he threw a small knife and cut my arm loosing my consentration and took out another gun and aimed it at me and said.

"little riding hood thought it be nice to go after the big bad wolf ,huh? he said

"Otoosan,Sensei! I yelled then he shot the first bullet at the floor. then he hit me with something and i went black.

(Hm...

Okay Astronomical Girl, there's just one thing I'd like to say, or several. First of all, try not to make this too violent, as Jeffbert wants this RP to be family-friendly, but you're not too detailed with it, so it should be okay. Second, let's not have this lead to another surgery, okay? The others didn't like it very much.

Since the pacing has changed a bit, should I inform Uran&Astro?)

Tenma's eyes had shot open awake, believing that he had heard a scream. His ears were muffled from his exhaustion, but even then, his gut feeling of something very wrong happening was enough to wake him up anyhow. He had felt this feeling before, when Tobio had left the Ministry of Science in his car, a feeling that Tenma had absolutely dreaded and wished that he would never feel again.

Groggily, he stood back up onto his feet and scanned around the area, his eyes darting everywhere.

"Tenshi?" He called out, but there was no answer.

Then he heard a gunshot. and Tenma's face had sunken grimly and he felt a heartbeat skip.

He blindly sprinted into a run to the source of the bang, his heart beating faster with every step he took.

"EVERYONE!!!!" His voice rang out throughout the building.

(Astronomical Girl, as exciting as this is, you're kinda taking a bit too much control of this rp thread, no offense. You've had a turn with the surgery plot, the child custody plot and now what appears to be a kidnapping plot, that's about three. It's all fine and good, but perhaps you should let the others have turns in creating a new setting or plot for the rp...)

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:(Hm...

Okay Astronomical Girl, there's just one thing I'd like to say, or several. First of all, try not to make this too violent, as Jeffbert wants this RP to be family-friendly, but you're not too detailed with it, so it should be okay. Second, let's not have this lead to another surgery, okay? The others didn't like it very much.

Since the pacing has changed a bit, should I inform Uran&Astro?)

Tenma's eyes had shot open awake, believing that he had heard a scream. His ears were muffled from his exhaustion, but even then, his gut feeling of something very wrong happening was enough to wake him up anyhow. He had felt this feeling before, when Tobio had left the Ministry of Science in his car, a feeling that Tenma had absolutely dreaded and wished that he would never feel again.

Groggily, he stood back up onto his feet and scanned around the area, his eyes darting everywhere.

"Tenshi?" He called out, but there was no answer.

Then he heard a gunshot. and Tenma's face had sunken grimly and he felt a heartbeat skip.

He blindly sprinted into a run to the source of the bang, his heart beating faster with every step he took.

"EVERYONE!!!!" His voice rang out throughout the building.

(Astronomical Girl, as exciting as this is, you're kinda taking a bit too much control of this rp thread, no offense. You've had a turn with the surgery plot, the child custody plot and now what appears to be a kidnapping plot, that's about three. It's all fine and good, but perhaps you should let the others have turns in creating a new setting or plot for the rp...)

/no,its not, a kidnapping plot, just a discovery.i'm not trying to control the thread just making it interesting, I appolgize if it came out that way, i wanted to keep this thread alive and so far it has. and don't worry about violance but i will respect your advice 3I, about the surgury,yes, i know people didn't like the story and a cut on the arm isn't surgery worthy just stiches. and as far as the stories go, no body came up with any so, without notice i was picked it seems to be the idea person, the person who comes up with stories and ideas i'm not complaining and i try to allow people to have their ideas for a plot but they either don't respond or they go along with what ever the story is about. this story so far is family-freindly but it doesn't hurt to add some excitement into the mix, but with all due respect it is your thread and you may do as you please/

I heard from outside the my study Tenma's voice and i hurried out to meet him standing outside the guestbedroom when i asked.

"Tenma,wheres Tenshi? I asked then when the door opened out came a male intruder who met face to face with my fist then pinned to the ground, then we saw Tenshi on the floor with her arm bleeding.

"Tenma, go see to Tenshi and tell me how she is? I told him while holding down the intruder.

"Look dude, I was hired" he told me

"by who and why?

"guy named "Jake", met him at a bar, gives me a sqwig and he tell me to spy on a little girl and he'll pay three hundres grand cash , and i did i've been into neighborhood for the brat, and then I saw Mrs.Michi drive here and here i am, just doing myself business"He told me

"it that the truth? becuase i would disect you right now and remove some plumbing"I warmed him

"No,No,man i didn't want any trouble just money thats it" He told me

"I have my own little girl and i can't afford her to go to school so yeah, desperate times call for desperate measures" he told me

"If i pay you will you keep your mouth shut then leave and not tell or take out some thing to make sure you don't speak? I asked

"I'll go for the first" he said
and i went and gave him 300,000 yen and he left as quickly as he came and i walked in the bed room to check up on Tenshi.looking around seeing only a bullet hole in the floor and an open window, and Tenshi with only a cut on her arm i disposed of the small knife and threw it out the window into the sea. Tenshi was unconscience and her arm needed stiches nothing major.

"that was sheer luck" I told Tenma

"She'll be fine, she's sleeping, and cut is just a quick stich and butterflys and its over"

Then she was wakeing up and seeing us with a smile, Otoosan,Black Jack, her brain was catching on.

"wheres the intruder? She asked
looking around nothing was broken or anything and took a deep breath and seemed glad that was over.

"Well, Tenshi, it appears that you won't be leaving your fathers sight for a while" I said

Tenma had skidded to a stop when the strange man had burst out from the door, only to get his face punched by Black Jack's fist, who Tenma was glad to see. But as soon as the man had fell, Tenma had immediately ran into the room to check to see what happened without another word, and was met with a frightening sight.

"Tenshi!!" Tenma gasped and immediately approached the girl, dropping to his knees as he tried to wake her up. His worry had increased tenfold by the cut on her arm.

As with Shunsaku Ban before, he had tried to gently shake her in an attempt to wake her, but to no avail. He was too preoccupied with her that he didn't hear the conversation between Dr. Black Jack and the man.

When Black Jack had entered the room, Tenma looked up to him expectantly, although he was hardly reassured until Tenshi had snapped her eyes open, bringing full attention.

"Tenshi!" Tenma cried and held her closer.

Upon her mention of the intruder, which Tenma assumed to have been that man from before, Tenma had again wordlessly looked up to Black Jack again.

"Astronomical girl" wrote:[QUOTE=Dr. Jerk;107845](Hm...

Then she was wakeing up and seeing us with a smile,
"Otoosan,Black Jack" her brain was catching on.

"wheres the intruder? She asked
looking around nothing was broken or anything and took a deep breath and seemed glad that was over.

"Well, Tenshi, it appears that you won't be leaving your fathers sight for a while" I said

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:Tenma had skidded to a stop when the strange man had burst out from the door, only to get his face punched by Black Jack's fist, who Tenma was glad to see. But as soon as the man had fell, Tenma had immediately ran into the room to check to see what happened without another word, and was met with a frightening sight.

"Tenshi!!" Tenma gasped and immediately approached the girl, dropping to his knees as he tried to wake her up. His worry had increased tenfold by the cut on her arm.

As with Shunsaku Ban before, he had tried to gently shake her in an attempt to wake her, but to no avail. He was too preoccupied with her that he didn't hear the conversation between Dr. Black Jack and the man.

When Black Jack had entered the room, Tenma looked up to him expectantly, although he was hardly reassured until Tenshi had snapped her eyes open, bringing full attention.

"Tenshi!" Tenma cried and held her closer.

Upon her mention of the intruder, which Tenma assumed to have been that man from before, Tenma had again wordlessly looked up to Black Jack again.

"The man was a desperate one, he says that he was hired by "Jake" to spy on her with a reward of 300 thousand yen, which i paid him twice over, if he left us alone and didn't say a word, he agreed and left" I told him

Then she noticed her arm was hurting and I told her.

"a cut is the least of your problems, Tenshi, wait here and i'll get that scar taken care of" I told her

"Ok" she said and looked up at her father who was now more worried then ever

"I'm sorry about all this, Otoosan" she frowned feeling ashamed that she made such a ruckus

I entered into the room with my needle and surgical thread and bandages and anti-bacterial spray and a small injection of pain killers to help with the stiching, after sutuiring her and putting a large bandage over the three-four inch scar, i left the two alone in the room and made sure everthing was locked, the doors,windows and stutters, the house was on lockdown then i returned to my study with the door partailly opened just in case.

I looked embarressed and ashamed that i scared everyone and made such a fuss over an intruder which my dogs could have taken care off under ten minutes. but i felt more of a sting becuase i had hoped that things would go smoother afterwards. i looked down to the floor in shame.

The first thing that O'Shay did when he got into his car was to check the temperature, weather and news. He didn't want to stay in the operating room any longer.

(Androids, if you're bored of this rp, you could drop out like some of the others did.)

"...What?!" Tenma looked over his shoulder, his eyes squinting, when he heard the name Jake.

"I thought that was all over!"

A loud growl of anger and stress had emitted from Tenma's throat as he held his head, hiding his enraged eyes underneath the black locks of his hair again. But he quickly settled down as he watched Black Jack stitch her cut up, although Tenma was still deeply angry at all of this. Black Jack had soon left afterward, which didn't make Tenma feel all the bit safer.

After the doctor had left, he turned back to Tenshi to see that she was looking quite down upon herself, at first Tenma thought she was scared, and for good reason, until she said sorry which had perplexed him.

"For what?" Tenma asked, and held her again. "You did nothing wrong, it was that man's doing. What matters most is that you are okay, I hope..."

He looked behind him again, Black Jack was still in his study, and Tenma knew that there was much to be discussed with him...

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:(Androids, if you're bored of this rp, you could drop out like some of the others did.)

"...What?!" Tenma looked over his shoulder, his eyes squinting, when he heard the name Jake.

"I thought that was all over!"

A loud growl of anger and stress had emitted from Tenma's throat as he held his head, hiding his enraged eyes underneath the black locks of his hair again. But he quickly settled down as he watched Black Jack stitch her cut up, although Tenma was still deeply angry at all of this. Black Jack had soon left afterward, which didn't make Tenma feel all the bit safer.

After the doctor had left, he turned back to Tenshi to see that she was looking quite down upon herself, at first Tenma thought she was scared, and for good reason, until she said sorry which had perplexed him.

"For what?" Tenma asked, and held her again. "You did nothing wrong, it was that man's doing. What matters most is that you are okay, I hope..."

He looked behind him again, Black Jack was still in his study, and Tenma knew that there was much to be discussed with him...

Reassuring me that it wasn't my fault and that all that mattered was that i was safe. I looked up and spoke.

"I guess it means i won't be leaving your side,right? I asked

I looked up with glass eyes and wondered about Otoosans feelings about me and the situation. I knew that he was scared sick about me and that i was nearly attacked and have gotten only a cut so far but I knew that, he was going to be asking questions from the look on his face when he looked out to Sensei's study with a stern face and eyes. I got back up and walked out to get a brush out of my bag.

Those eyes of her were sharp. Sharp and full of meaning. Tenma had remembered several times when people had told him about his own fierce eyes. He now knew what it felt like to be looked at with them. But unlike his, her's weren't cold.

Those eyes seemed to ask him more questions, more than what she had asked him by word.

And he was still unsure about many things.

(And myself. Really, I'm quite unsure about this whole thing too. See I didn't really ask for a little girl, as my main intention was to play as a child'less Tenma like he was in many of the series. But it's fine now, I suppose.)

"It would be better that you stay with us, for your safety..." Tenma finally answered.

When she had stood up to fetch something, Tenma had stirred a little. The reason being was that he was still too frightened for her to leave his side, even just to take a few steps away to get something.

He had to calm down, but it was difficult.

And the need to talk to Black Jack was great, as well as something personal that he would preferably not have anyone else hear. But in the same light, he didn't wanted to leave her either.

'Jake... what do you have against the Tenma family?...' Tenma had glared in thought.

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:Those eyes of her were sharp. Sharp and full of meaning. Tenma had remembered several times when people had told him about his own fierce eyes. He now knew what it felt like to be looked at with them. But unlike his, her's weren't cold.

Those eyes seemed to ask him more questions, more than what she had asked him by word.

And he was still unsure about many things.

(And myself. Really, I'm quite unsure about this whole thing too. See I didn't really ask for a little girl, as my main intention was to play as a child'less Tenma like he was in many of the series. But it's fine now, I suppose.)

"It would be better that you stay with us, for your safety..." Tenma finally answered.

When she had stood up to fetch something, Tenma had stirred a little. The reason being was that he was still too frightened for her to leave his side, even just to take a few steps away to get something.

He had to calm down, but it was difficult.

And the need to talk to Black Jack was great, as well as something personal that he would preferably not have anyone else hear. But in the same light, he didn't wanted to leave her either.

'Jake... what do you have against the Tenma family?...' Tenma had glared in thought.

I walked out of the room and back in the girls room to get a hair brush and walked out with two hair bows and the brush and walked back into the room where father was and saw him looking at Sensei and i asked.

"Is there something wrong, Otoosan? I looked up at him

as I waited for an answer, I brushed my hair throughly and seperated them into bands, then braided them and I got braided pigtails. I looked up at hime again and asked.

"Otoosan, we need to get to bed, or you'll be a grumpy lump tomorrow morning" I told him and touched his hand then looked at the clock which was 1:23 am. I grabbed his hand and swung on it and swung back and forth then turned upside down till by legs wrapped themselves around his arm along with my arms, and his hand on my face as I swinged on his arm.