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"Astronomical girl" wrote:everywhere around me people are trying to get me to answer then when i buckled myself in and turned it on the board then i positioned myself on the board then plotted the coordinates then i hovered ten feet off the ground then

VOOM! i shot off

Astro was walking behind Max and he must have noticed him. He immediately got on his board and was a few feet in the air and then shot off like a rocket. Astro boy then transformed into his armor and then flew after him to catch up to him. What was Max doing? Was he up to no good?

"Astro!" Uran called. She stopped momentarily, and caught her breath. Uran suddenly saw a sports shop. Uran got an idea.

Uran ran into the sports shop, and grabbed a small pair of skates. She put some money on a counter, put the skates on, and ran back out of the shop.

Uran had gotten the biggest and hardest wheels on the skates, to go as fast as she could.

"Astro!" She called again. She was still very far away from Astro and the strange boy, but she was gaining on them

I don't know why I'm doing this, Uran thought, But I have a feeling that I should.

"GhostATR" wrote:[QUOTE=Astronomical girl;107919]everywhere around me people are trying to get me to answer then when i buckled myself in and turned it on the board then i positioned myself on the board then plotted the coordinates then i hovered ten feet off the ground then

VOOM! i shot off

Astro was walking behind Max and he must have noticed him. He immediately got on his board and was a few feet in the air and then shot off like a rocket. Astro boy then transformed into his armor and then flew after him to catch up to him. What was Max doing? Was he up to no good?[/QUOTE]
seeing Astro on my tail I had to loose him and i knew the best way of doing it, molecular speed.I turned the nob then pressed then

Zoomed like a hot molecule, I disapeared from anybodys sight like a whiff of smoke. I zoomed down to the school of my choice and waited for a signal from a certain sombody by the name of Natasha Claudette-Haynes. she and i were freinds for the longest time, we were both diaper buddies in preschool until i moved after the incident and we only talked via email and telephone. she was the prettiest girl, i've ever known, She was a very white blond with blue-green eyes and slightly tanned skin,and in her white sailor dress she was to die for. i waited for the signal.

(I'm a little concerned about something.

Astronomical Girl's writing is alright, but the number of spelling errors might cause problems. See if you intend to post this on fanfiction.net, then you're probably going to need someone to fix these small errors. Because I know for a fact that fanfiction.net is known to delete stories that are error-filled...)

thats what Microsoft Word is for

But don't you care that your spelling is kind of... off? It would be nice if you fixed it, please? (I don't mean to pester... Please understand.) The main idea of your posts are great, and the way you express it, but...

from now on,i'll use Word to write my posts to then copy and paste here one of the most important things about writing is spelling.

Yeah?

i'm somewhat confused by your reply,Androids

I think he was referring to "That so?" or "Really?" to the Microsoft Word idea.

Anyway, I guess its Androids' turn to play as Abercombie.