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It was becoming a long day, I, Dr. Umataro Tenma, had thought as I rushed to and 'fro from the halls of the Ministry of Science. There had been a recent shipment of new machines and parts, all which needed a throughout inspection. Being the very Minister of Science, I was in needed in almost every department to help pass my judgement on the deliveries.

Already I had to make several rounds around the Ministry, and again I was needed elsewhere.

I was hurrying to my next place of destination, my shoes clapping against the floor in a hurried pace, and passed by one of the office doors when suddenly I heard a loud thud coming from inside. I stopped and turned around, identifying the office door as Mrs. Mycroft's.

Immediately I remembered that Mrs. Mycroft was out, and that there should be no one in her office. Hearing a quiet voice inside, I immediately took out the master key from my lab coat pocket and unlocked the door, swiftly sliding it open.

"Who is there?!" I demanded.

Only to see a mere child inside. I paused and blinked in sheer confusion.

"What... a child?..." I muttered.

I walked in and looked down on the boy, arms crossed and lips frowning. "What are you doing here? Children aren't allowed in the Ministry of Science!"

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:It was becoming a long day, I, Dr. Umataro Tenma, had thought as I rushed to and 'fro from the halls of the Ministry of Science. There had been a recent shipment of new machines and parts, all which needed a throughout inspection. Being the very Minister of Science, I was in needed in almost every department to help pass my judgement on the deliveries.

Already I had to make several rounds around the Ministry, and again I was needed elsewhere.

I was hurrying to my next place of destination, my shoes clapping against the floor in a hurried pace, and passed by one of the office doors when suddenly I heard a loud thud coming from inside. I stopped and turned around, identifying the office door as Mrs. Mycroft's.

Immediately I remembered that Mrs. Mycroft was out, and that there should be no one in her office. Hearing a quiet voice inside, I immediately took out the master key from my lab coat pocket and unlocked the door, swiftly sliding it open.

"Who is there?!" I demanded.

Only to see a mere child inside. I paused and blinked in sheer confusion.

"What... a child?..." I muttered.

I walked in and looked down on the boy, arms crossed and lips frowning. "What are you doing here? Children aren't allowed in the Ministry of Science!"

-Max-
"Huh? I turned and fell down to the ground and saw a tall man who was calling me a "child”. I straightened myself and said.

“I detest being called “child” I prefer to be called “Vertically impaired pre-adults and FYI my mom works here and I’m waiting for her, so what about children?” I told him picking up the cup and PC

Then I picked up my board and said

“Also, you’d be better of not yelling or demanding so much because then there might ring some truth to the name,Doc” I included and smiled sarcastically

And then my board beeped.


“Speak of devil” I said
Behind him was my mom in probably the least happy of moods when she spoke to me.

“Max, what are you doing here and how did you get in? She asked me

“I was waiting got you and via the open window up here and my aero-board” I told her

“Max, I’ve told about the office and that it’s not a place for children” she scolded me

“Except there is only you and him and I don’t like that, mom, dangerous things happen with two people”

I saw her tap her shoe on the carpet floor and glare at me with the eyes of “I’ll deal with you later” glare

“Get out…now and stay out of my tools and my purse” She growled at me and I grabbed my board and jumped on the main desk where the buttons were and I zoomed off.

-Max’s Mother-
With Max gone I sighed and said

“I’m sorry my son is too young but too old” I told him

"And he's also a mischievous genius that happens to exsperiment with everything out from under the sun.

"Hmph!" Tenma scoffed.

"You best keep that boy of yours under control, Mrs. Mycroft!" Standing akimbo. "I've heard of a child from the others always breaking into the Ministry, and I've had just enough of this."

And with that said, he had left the office but stopped at the door. "Mischievous maybe, but a genius? Children make up the wildest of things!"

"Dr. Jerk" wrote:"Hmph!" Tenma scoffed.

"You best keep that boy of yours under control, Mrs. Mycroft!" Standing akimbo. "I've heard of a child from the others always breaking into the Ministry, and I've had just enough of this."

And with that said, he had left the office but stopped at the door. "Mischievous maybe, but a genius? Children make up the wildest of things!"

-Max's mother-
Hearing Tenma's advice,I took a breath in and said.

"Doctor, he is not the ten kid down the street ,he's twelve and he's very risky, he's gone up to space with the board and burned down his room and or half the hoosue, i've lost count how many times, and taking in gaseous tanks into his room and building in the middle of the night, broken windows, doors,and belongings, all which were either cuased by his board or by his "exsperiments" with chemeicals he takes from hardwear stores and the internet,cost's this woman three years of debt"I told him

"He's like a magnet pole always opposing and fighting against anything but if he doesn't get under control child services will take him away from me"I muttered

I cleaned up the mess of my desk as i returned back to work.

Tenma rose an eyebrow at this.

"A child like that sounds more trouble than worth!" He left the room to return to where he was needed.

"Children... hmf!" He muttered as he went.

It was pretty obvious to anyone that Tenma had lately grown to dislike children, to say the least. The only one he ever considered perfect was Tobio, and even then he had imperfections too, such as when he had foolishly decided to drive a car on his own which had cost his life. The grief wasn't enough, and Tenma had built Astro Boy, who turned out to be even worse and resulted in Tenma selling him to the robot dealer Ham Egg.

Since then, he was just no longer fond of kids anymore.

(Wasn't really sure how to approach this. If it's bad I'll edit it)

-Astro
After school ended I walked home after school ended. I couldn't believe how strange the day went. What was Max doing just running off like that? But he wasn't a criminal, I knew that. Then I stopped to see Uran and Atlas sitting beside the sidewalk talking to each other and said hello to Atlas and Uran.

-Max's Mom-
After Max, left Tenma got into a tiffy about it and i spoke.
"One tree doesn't make the forest,Doctor Tenma"I told him

"and also you'd be better off to be tolerant to my children, becuase i know at times children can be a hassle but only if you let them, Max is just older and is independant" I told him

(Don't know what to write, but here goes)

-Uran-

"Hi, big brother Astro!" Uran said gleefully. She grinned up at her brother. "Where are you going, Astro?" she asked.
Uran stood up, and looked around the park. It was a pretty green place, full of tree's. Uran struggled to stay still, since she was still wearing her skates

-Little Atlas-

Atlas squinted his eyes, and looked up at Astro. "Yo bro." he said.
Atlas stood up, and began circling around Astro, examining him, his head slightly tilted.

"So, what do you know about the kid named Max?" Atlas asked, as if he was a inspector.

"Astronomical girl" wrote:-Max's Mom-
After Max, left Tenma got into a tiffy about it and i spoke.
"One tree doesn't make the forest,Doctor Tenma"I told him

"and also you'd be better off to be tolerant to my children, becuase i know at times children can be a hassle but only if you let them, Max is just older and is independant" I told him

...Tenma didn't really hear her, as he was already well on his way...

(No offense, but this entire thing seems to be getting very disorganized.)