Astroboy Doujinshi-"Something Bugging you?"

[zeo]

it begins. so far,ive only got the (shoddy) title page.
before you read ahead,hear me out-this wont be no adrien-like doujin. compared to adrien,im really bad. howwever,this is something i really want to do,and,although the art might not be as good as adriens, i will go back and remake the pages if i get any better,and even this badly colored title page.



astroboy © osuma tesuka
gyroboy © me
crono © 1magus/adrien_68

[zeo]

(and no,not all pages will be one-panelers,just for further notice)

[CommanderEVE]

Wow, there fanatic! When you get better at coloring and shading you'll be an awesome artist.

[zeo]

thanks Sparx!!
hopefuly when 1magus and adrein_68 get online,they'll give this a look.acctualy,i'd be happy if a lot of people looked at it,but i doubt they will...
oh well,i upload it to DA to,so...
anyway,PAGE 2 ALEART!



yes,IT BEGINS...
gyros speach is green,cronos teal,and astro's red.
you should be able to tell who speaks when they do.
and yes,i realise the text is different from the written version.oh well...
and yes,thats the first time ive drawn astro from behind...YAY!!
i love the zombie closest to the screens shirt."i PWN!" XD yes,you do pwn,and any zombie of pure pwnege deserves to be named after the greatest zombie that ever lived!...er..died.
BUB THE ZOMBIE!!
(yes,i HAVE watched Day Of The Dead XP *does Bub the Zombies salute*)

pages 3,4,and MAYBE 5 will be up later..as im a naturaly fast drawer.

[zeo]

another page.i know i said 3,4, and posialby 5 would be up yesterday...i lied ^^; sorry.
'nyway,here be page 3!



my favorite things about this are gyro's heroic pose in panal 3,astros completely distraught espression in the little mini-panal right there,and cronos look in both panal 4, and panal 2.he looks so adorable there (self ego boosting continues)
we're getting close to the end of the prelude now,and comming even closer to the start of the story...im acctualy rather ecited!

[zeo]

alright,FINAL page update until someone reads this thread O_O;



yah,gyros emmy winning speach fetures here...

gyro:*holding emmy and dancing* aha,oh yeah,i smoked you,oh yeah...

...ignore him -_-; anyway,on a serious note,im very proud of this page.the final panal could be better,but who cares? BASK AT THE MOTION LINES!!
...oh,and to clear things up,all words spoken are in comic sans font,and narration is done in computerfont font.and htat ments to be gyro narrating right there.
well,that that,until i get some feedback,im gonna leave it at that...

[stoogefreaky]

So far I've read all of them! Good Story!

[CommanderEVE]

MAN THIS IS GREAT! *cough cough* my mouth hurts. yeah that is great *thumbs up*

I really love the way you posed the cartoons

[zeo]

thanks a lot stoogefreaky ^.^ hope you'll stick around for the whole thing =^w^=
and thanks to you to,sparx ^.^ im glad your so exited =D *EGO BOOST TIME!!*
page 5 might be up later if i draw it =P

[CommanderEVE]

By the way, I love the way you do youre smiles, "=^w^=" it looks like a face.