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if i saw astro after school or shopping or i just came downstairs and saw him
i would be like: WHAT THE! and i would hug him tightly and make sure he wright his signature on my poster and then of course take a million pics of him and i. then i would mostly take him every where!!!
i would be like: WHAT THE! and i would hug him tightly and make sure he wright his signature on my poster and then of course take a million pics of him and i. then i would mostly take him every where!!!
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@ cuejqi
Since you stated here that you are looking to improve and broaden your vocabulary skills, I thought I would take the liberty to help.
I will start with the following post since it was revived anyways and it is the perfect example to use:
Now, in retrospect this makes perfect sense if you choose to ignore the typographical error found in the word 'horsepower'.
However, your preceding post here is slightly out of context and makes your proceeding 'head kickin' post make no sense.
You said: 'if I were you', which to me is indicative that you think I should "kneel down immediately at the feet and kiss him on the sole for admiration"... which was a great answer to my smart ass response... but then you stated - and I quote:
"he might exert his 100000 hoursepower cute red boots on my head...." with 'My' meaning 'Yourself'. This is incorrect.
Your post should look more like this:
"I thought he might be tempted (added verb for effect) to exert the power (added noun for effect) of his 100,000 horsepower, cute red boots on your head." (with the word 'your' referring to the antagonist, which in this case is yours truly).
Well, that just about wraps it up! I hope this helps you express yourself properly the next time you would like to voice your wishes for someone to receive a skull thumpin'!
Have a good one!
Cheers,
Novacain
Since you stated here that you are looking to improve and broaden your vocabulary skills, I thought I would take the liberty to help.
I will start with the following post since it was revived anyways and it is the perfect example to use:
"cuejqi" wrote:I thought he might exert his 100000 hoursepower cute red boots on my head....
Now, in retrospect this makes perfect sense if you choose to ignore the typographical error found in the word 'horsepower'.
However, your preceding post here is slightly out of context and makes your proceeding 'head kickin' post make no sense.
You said: 'if I were you', which to me is indicative that you think I should "kneel down immediately at the feet and kiss him on the sole for admiration"... which was a great answer to my smart ass response... but then you stated - and I quote:
"he might exert his 100000 hoursepower cute red boots on my head...." with 'My' meaning 'Yourself'. This is incorrect.
Your post should look more like this:
"I thought he might be tempted (added verb for effect) to exert the power (added noun for effect) of his 100,000 horsepower, cute red boots on your head." (with the word 'your' referring to the antagonist, which in this case is yours truly).
Well, that just about wraps it up! I hope this helps you express yourself properly the next time you would like to voice your wishes for someone to receive a skull thumpin'!
Have a good one!
Cheers,
Novacain
Last edited by Novacain on Fri Jul 22, 2011 1:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Unless you meant to say you wanted to be kicked in the noggin', in which case please disregard this post. Thx
Reason: Unless you meant to say you wanted to be kicked in the noggin', in which case please disregard this post. Thx
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