Looking back on my posts I realized that I never posted it, I did in fact color it but somehow had completely neglected to post it. I'll get around to that as soon as possible (I'll have to fish the drawing out of my archives then re-scan it or take a photo of it). I did actually read all of it and it was a JOY to read. I really did not expect Uran to have such a huge role in that story and it took me by surprise.
Thanks, I will replace the B&W drawing with the color one up on FF.Net for the story illustration.
I find I like writing stories with Uran as the lead character, but so far I've really only done two that featured her, the other one being "Uran and the little people". I see her as good friends with Pinoko in my head as well (as in the 1980 anime episode with Blackjack).