The Story of Zinc

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

@ Animegirl I will try to post more tommorrow. @ sstwins Welcome to the forums to place a picture first you want to make sure that it is on a website like photo bucket or deviant art. Then you right click on the pict and go down to properties. There should be something in there that looks like a web address. You copy all of that address then you come to here click on the mountain little link and paste it in there (hopes this helps you may want to private message/pm AstroForever or Aprilseven

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

I then used most of my strength and pushed myself into a sitting position. I saw my tiny legs resting infront of me and watched me move my feet back and fourth. I pulled my hand up infront of my face and observed how my fingers bend.
I looked up for the people and realised they had gone farther away. I reached out my hand towards them. My arm suddenly felt very heavy and as it collapsed I realised for the first time that I was on a table.
When my arm flung off the table it was followed by my shoulder then the rest of my.body. I watched the ground spead towards my face. When I thudded against the cold, hard floor I felt , for the first time, pain. I pressed my hands down on the floor and pushed myself up until I was wobbling on my feet. When the wobbling became shaking I slapped my hand down on the table. I was still determined to get to the people though. I picked up my left leg first and placed it out infront a little. Then I did then same with my right leg, but this time I let go of the table and took a farther step out. When I took the next step I started to shake, but by this time I was to far away to grab the table. I watched the ground speed towards me and braced for more pain, but this time instead of pain I felt two hands underneath my arms. When I looked up I saw that it was the boy. He pulled me back onto my feet.

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Instantly, I rapped my arms around him. Not from fear of falling, but from joy that I had atlast made it to them. I released the boy and then heard the girl say something.
"What should we call her?" Her voice was softer and more high pitch then the whispers I had once heard.
The old man thought for a little then said "What about Magneseum?" Neither the boy or the girl liked that." How about Zinc?" This seemed to appeal both the kids.
"Hello , Zinc, I'm Astro. Your big brother."The boy said.
At first I didn't understand so I mimicked him." Hello , Zinc, I'm Astro." I said. Both the kids laughed at me. Then I understood. "I mean. Hello , Astro, I'm Zinc."
"Hello , Zinc, I'm Zoran." The girl said.
"And I'm Dr. O'Shay." The old man said."It is time we got going."
At first, I thought they were trying to leave me, so I grabbed onto Astro and held tight.

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

"It's okay , Zinc, you get to come too." Astro said.
For the first time I felt embarrassed. I released Astro. I followed them out the door and down the big metal hallways. Then.we went it a tiny room that could only fit six people at most. Doctor hit a button and the doors closed. Then the hole room started to fall and I shreaked. Just then the falling stopped and the doors opened. I ran out and probably would have kept running, but I felt Zoran's hand clasp around my rist.
"It's okay , Zinc, it's only an elevator it's supost to do that. I pulled my hand away.
"I knew that." I lied, but I don't think she fell for it.
"Come one , you guys, we are going outside." Astro yelled astro her opened up the doors.
I darted out. It was dark and cold, but not as dead feeling as before. As I took a couple steps I realised I was getting pelted with rain. Zoran and Astro ran infront of me and I followed them to a yellow car. Astro picked me up and placed me inside. Zoran climbed in beside me and Astro and Dr. O'Shay got in front.

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

Lol I love this!! I'm in love with this story already :swoon: Zinc is so cute! She's like how Astro was in the movie, or something. X3
" Hello , Zinc, I'm Astro."
Lolo Zinc XD

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

glad you like it. I will try to post the next chapter in a week

[Anime Girl]

That was really good. I can't wait to read more!

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Thanks

[Black Rabbit]

Aww, Zinc is so cute! I love the way this story is written, in Zinc's point of view! There are a few mistakes, but besides that, its great! 8D I can't wait to read more. =w=

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Glad you like it. Yeah I wrote the whole thing on a smart phone that was determined to change every thing I said