Astro Boy Story: Love You Yet (Revised)

[Kabuitsu]

When I read that line I could only think:

Cora: OEMGEEITSALIVE D:
Atom: Wat?

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

Yush XDD C'mon, write more, please? XD

[Alittleacorn]

Lol I am! I am! Don't worry. Besides, I said in the first post the 3 chapters are on fanfictions, you could always read those untils I've done editing more? =3

And another revised part might come in a day maybe ^_^'

[AprilSeven]

Even though I don't like my Astro acting like a toaster :d oh:, this is DEFINITELY the most creative take on his story I've seen.

- TOASTER!!!

[Alittleacorn]

(scratches cheek) Er...define how Astro is a toaster

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

That's a bit of a LOL X3
OMD, this is so cute. I keep reading it over and over and every time she sees his body I'm like "YES! YES!! OMD, OMD!!"

[AprilSeven]

(scratches cheek) Er...define how Astro is a toaster

You know, a friendly machine - but not much goin' on upstairs!

[Kabuitsu]

I already read the three (not revised) chapters the same day I read the revised chapter 1.
I can't wait to see the rest revised C:

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

I'm seriously sitting in front of the computer waiting for something to happen on ABO, particularily you writing more. XD

[Alittleacorn]

Aw, I'm revising as fast as I can! XD