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My Star Trek/Astroboy book

Postby Robin » 11 years ago

Hey guys. I started an Start Trek/Astroboy crossover book and I was wondering is I could get some of you guys to help me edit it and some ideas from you guys? Thanks!
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Postby Tetsuwan Penguin » 11 years ago

Dannavy85 had a few st x an stories on ff.net.

If you need any help pm me.
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Postby Robin » 11 years ago

Anyone else wanna help?
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Postby Windswept Cloak » 11 years ago

I'd love to check it out if I had the time. I'm not too familiar with the Star Trek series, but maybe I could give a few writing tips. :)
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Postby Robin » 11 years ago

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10291776/1/Star-Trek-Victory

Thats what I have so far.

PLEASE read it guys and let me know how im doing with it
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Postby Tetsuwan Penguin » 11 years ago

Hey except for a few typo's ('if' instead of 'of' in part one) and a few other minor ones (pot calling the kettle black) a very good start! You really know your 'Trek' universe and I like the mix of at least three different Trek settings. Always wondered if there were any other NX class ships built!

I hope we don't have another case of Astro being found after his trip to the sun. That one has been milked to death already!
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Postby Robin » 11 years ago

Naw, I was thinking launched into space by tenma to save him from nuclear destruction from world war 3
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